My Star
it is all coming back to me like echoes.
wish I could buy you a diamond ring
or be your ringtone.
there are so many spots
yet you are my spot light.
your friends may tell you things to draw us apart.
we are a work of art we should be drawn together.
you are a star
let us share the brighter life.
All I want to do is make you feel love and and free always.
the truth is you got me surfing on your love wave.
my quest of searching for a star ended
when I found you .
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I really like the line about art and drawn together. Nice one
fresh yeah ...
Def
You can take me, but you cannot take my bunghole.... For I have no bunghole....
Lovely, I was also going to say that the lines:
are fabulous. :)
glad you like it ;)
thanks ... following you
I LOVE that picture man.
Ah, love.
Well, this poem will get you all the ladies if you read it to them. lol
As always brother amazing words shared with us. You should write a book with your poems in them. :)
great idea ... i think i will do that.
thanks
I'd love to read a book of your poems. Planning on doing the same with some of mine one day, but going to set something up to encourage my friends like you who create outstanding stuff :)
Cool... keep me posted
Really beautiful poem. I agree, always let your love be free without cages. Caged birds can't fly.
:) thanks...
beautifully written, you have a new follower :)
thanks
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