COMA
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Thoughts of static silence
Running through a vacuum mind
In a mirror image realm
What you perceive is not what you see
Numb feelings
Uncomfortable noise
Flashing lights of looping flash bangs
It is disturbing
Time is compressed
Trying to leave is an epic fail
Tired legs from timeless paddling
in attempt to escape the intrepid votex
Grasping for air
A thin line between life and death
A bridge between worlds
What you perceive is not what you see
a trap to eternal doom
Hazy illusion
A trickery of the mind
The body is failing
Time is compressed
in a sub-aquatic framework of zero gravity
A living vegetable
laying in hope to regain awareness
~
check out my other poems
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dante31/the-mirror
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dante31/zephyr
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dante31/blue
Very nice @dante31 ... "What you perceive is not what you see", in most of the time, for the most of us.
Yeah fam
So i was thinking, if you have read this poem... what do you think it is all about in your own understanding
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