Spaces & their crossing [Day 15]

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Spaces & their crossing

-------original poetry-------
with photos by HeretyczkaA


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From here to where here goes,
From now until now is no more:
Words cross the spaces formed
By the shape of thought.

As a thought sprang so it falls,
As a seed fell so it springs.
Time sews the bridges of life
For the mind to walk across.

Between forward steps the foot swings back,
The path is both below the foot
& the foot below it.
But the concept of position
Is beneath them both
Married by the twine of motion.

From there until there becomes here,
From then to now to then
& back again to then
These words trace vectors
That become a blueprint
That becomes a bridge
For the mind to walk across.


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Written by
@d-pend
3/21/18
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Photos by
HeretyczkaA

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1 — "Bridge"
2 — "Outgoing"
3 — "Building"

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cyclicity of times and space..
thought-provoking poetry, like it very much!
I often think about what was in the past, what will be in the future, about its connection, and the connection can be easily found after analysing...

do you know about regressive hypnosis? this practise allows people to see his past lives, I read a lot about it, and it proves that nothing is accidental, the connection is really strong, and you're right - the ciclicity had its power...

Life thought of as a relational web between distinct points. The subject not inhabiting any singular point but rather the mesh between points, defined by the contrast between themselves in one moment and the selves they were in all others.

And language, too, a relational web - the individual words unable to describe concrete ideas. Only in the process of combination (and by virtue of the words excluded - i.e. contrasted) can we start to gesture at a shared understanding of reality. The more complex the thought, the more we have to think of it in terms of other thoughts, and as such, complex words can only be described in terms of less complex ones.

All those old lectures on post-structuralism start flooding back to me haha. Fascinating stuff and, as always, effortlessly crafted.

This is to me is an amazing depiction of time and season, the movement from then to now, when then was now and now was then, so beautifully construct. Glad I found your blog @d-pend

Hi d-pend i am from steemschool, and i have been listening to you talk on the voice chat and it is always amazing, we did interact once. And your poems are awesome i read every inch of it.
I like your use of words, arrangement. This looks difficult and would love to learn more.

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Strikes me with the notion of perpetual motion (Hey I should write some poetry maybe!;) and the art of thinking and dreaming and inventing while we exist and progress.

Great stuff as always.

Your words put me into a loop bro, I'm not sure if we're going up or down, whether tomorrow is today or today is yesterday. Its well constructive to have that loop effect and I guess that was the plan

We can jump all the obstacles of life. You just need imagination to appropriate the spaces. Greetings.

Nice poetry where are these places you have pictures of?

Hey @polarbeats, thank you! Not sure about the bottom two but the top one is a bridge in Warsaw. I think they are all locations in Poland. The photographer lives there.

interesting how they engineered that bridge

Time sews the bridges of life
For the mind to walk across.

This is a great poem that connects our mind with the bridge of ideas @d-pend. I feel like a d-pendulum reading it.

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