in light n' mental fog [Day 54]
in light n' mental fog
sticks n' stones,
I gotta mirror o' blood!
friction. fragility,
an adamant sword's got me.
all's fair in love and war,
unfair in dissolution and art.
an intricate mind's an issue indeed
solved by a simple heart.
I know you are, but what am I?
I gotta toddler's shield.
silt, serenity, syllables:
from sandy letters appeared.
a mist hangs over the mountain,
a fog lies under the bridge.
friction. fragility. sticks n' stones,
it's words that draw me near.
Written by
@d-pend
4/29/18
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Photos by
Brian Wolfe
.1 — "Soothing Gloom"
2 — "Earth is a Temple"
3 — "Forest of Fog"
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Though the years I have come to find out that it is not the sticks and stones that linger ... and beware a foggy bridge screams troll don't let it eat you billygoat ...
You write well. Your poetry is very close to nature. Good job. I appreciate . Thanks for sharing.
あなたはよく書きます。あなたの詩は自然にとても近いです。よくやった。私は感謝します。共有してくれてありがとう。so is this comment it seems , highly compostable ...
Wow!! @d-pend. I am a little afraid to make a comment. I have decided to write this comment first and then bring it through a translator and comment again.
First, I love your use of punctuation. I am always confused and just threw them out but now you used every punctuation I know of.
Second, you have an original thought inspired by your paradoxical mind:
Finally the message of the poem hits home as we throw words around a lot without much thought. When this poetry competition is over I may take another round of media fasting. Just to learn to be quiet again.
Here is my cheetah comment as well:
Wow!! @ d-pend. I am afraid to leave a comment. I decided to write this comment first, then import it back through the translator and comments.
First, I like to use punctuation. I have always been confused and thrown away, but now I have used all the punctuation I know.
Second, you have a creative idea inspired by a paradoxical mind.
Finally, the poem's message hits the house, throwing words around many words without much thought. Once this competition is over, I can have another media hiatus. We must learn to be quiet again.
This made me laugh so hard @mineopoly. Just hit me at the perfect time. Thank you 😂😂😂😂😂
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wow I really couldn't understand what is this all about, stick n'stones clearly means that a person has a problem, so the word love and using the word heart after it made me think it's about some one lost in love, combined with the word fog , then the conclusion is that
it's about someone who loved truly and blind so he stuck in love but the other person didn't love him .
Some one been calling you names. Hope not. Stick and stones pack a physical wallop. But the energy contained within some words can be felt a whole lot longer.
Wonderfully intelligent and expressive penning, as always:)
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I am sorry to say that this is a phoke in the form of phoōōgāphara dā driśa atē iha vāla tuhānū asala pratibhā in the mahimā karadē hanaI really loved the hair.
all your catches are so beautiful @d-pend. I really like. from now on I will follow you and enjoy all the beautiful things you share. Thank you
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Phat pelicans are on their way with a complimentary crate of snake oil, when you have time please use 3 times daily to improve chest hair ...
Well done @d-pend, unusual as usual
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loved the juxtaposition in this poem. both visually and conceptually 👍🏽👍🏽