Good mourning

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Good mourning

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I wake up into the husk of a world
Unfinished, where you can see
The guide-lines.

Caution tape, gummed walls,
Flecks of plaster, neglected caulking:
The world is a lonesome construction site.

I am the stern surveyor!
The progress displeases me.

But still, there is a broad smile
On my face—the world is an overripe fruit.

It's a stump on a footpath,
Or it's a boulder in a stream.

It's ghost laughter
And a frigid embrace.

It's the sun rising on
A funhouse graveyard.

If you look at it from the right angle
It disappears entirely: a trick of the light.



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Writing & images
Created by @d-pend
on February 22, 2018.

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Sometimes we look at the world and it displeases us because they're a whole lot of things that needs perfection but it's just not there, your metaphors which you used to compare the world us amazing,

The metaphors are one of the sweetest I've seen, the truth is just as you applied the way we look at it, seems untrue, so Sometimes the angle which we look at life makes us think from different perspectives @d-pend

However using poetry to convey this is like frying eggs without breaking its shell however you made it possible, and that's the artistic ability of a man talented with many colours my friend.

It's noon here buddy enjoy your day.

very nice verso @d-pend you are the maximum .. my praise for you ..

poetry
"And it's not true, pain, I know you, you're nostalgia for the good life
and loneliness of a gloomy heart, of a ship without shipwreck and without a star.
Like a forgotten dog that has no trace or smell and errs
by the roads, without road, like the child who on the night of a party
it gets lost in the crowd and the dusty air and the candles
sparkling, astonished, and amazes his heart with music and sorrow, so I go, melancholy drunkard, lunatic guitarist, poet,
and, poor man in dreams, always looking for God in the fog."

There is no doubt that life is not a bed of roses at all but one can make it bed of roses according to his/her approach towards life. That approach is known as a Beautiful Smile. Yes, smile has a psychological effect on human behavior to make any situation more pleasant. After reading the pray of today yes i do consider a pray; i am feeling so light and composed. A big thanks to the finest creator of the words aka @d-pend, Wonderful stuff My Spiritual Brother <3

Absolutely agree!

It's amazing @d-pend, you can always produce beautiful poetry. The words of poetry and your soul are already united. Where do you sit when writing poetry?
So the words of your poetry can always touch my soul, when I read it. There may be a similar way to writing beautiful poetry. If anything, I'll try a way like you. thank you ... :)

@d-pend, Sorry for delay reply...Good morning to you coz here's morning time. You posted three poetry's very soon topical indeed 03 daily time zones. Of course, most important time zone for us morning time. Morning wanna ready to day activities. If we have great thoughts and feelings, how to work planing today sure definitely will happen as our wishes. You entire this poem fascinating thoughts. It's fantastic. Fortunately I saw this poem my morning time. With sunlight wake up us. Sun light has more power; it gives us more extra power for delightful arrangement today. Wake up is un-finish and sleep is finish day activities. Wake up is better I know sleep will great. Indeed glorious images attractive looks to blog. Thanks for inspiration.

The beauty of early mornings and their sunrise is very special. You must pay special attention and learn to appreciate it. Most of the time, we forget what is it like waking up in the beautiful morning and enjoy the moment of freshness but instead stay in bed because you don’t want to get out in the cold. The early morning sun offers a beautiful and magical sightings and is waiting for you to capture the moment in silence.

I want to go back in time in a time-machine and create an inception in John Lennon's mind so he creates a song with this lyrics --believing it's his idea-- and includes it in the White Album.

The images were just insane but the poetry has its own taste

Sometimes we never take the meaning behind the light, whereas in the light of the means that can be taken, like making art, poetry and abstract paintings
thanks @d-pend

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