[POETRY] 24 HOURS WITH A PEN

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Hi steemian, I am here with a new poem series titled, 24 HOURS WITH A PEN.
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As this is a new move from me, your positive criticisms are all welcome, Thank you for your help and feedback as I unleash the first in the series 24 HOURS SWITH A PEN

​   Homo Sapiens

​   Full of valor and the "I can do it" spirit

​   Tapping the current helps in moving

​   Moving an inch, you are there

​   Another inch, you are in it

​   What a beautiful being we are

​   The mesmerizing fact is still unknown till date

​   Science says he is from **Evolutionary changes**

​   Religion says he is created by another higher being

​   All in all, he is a being

​   Either created or developed

​   

​   It takes a million people a day to be fools

​   It takes a day for a fool to be wise

​   Not just a coincidence, but by luck, so they say

​   This is the power behind being an Human Being

​   Divided by religion, skin, language and even soil

​   Hatred between the Black and the White is more than between Christians and Muslims

​   One can't say!

​   North Korea and South Korea are like the ocean water and the sea water

​   North Sudan and South Sudan are at war

​   Ukraine and Russia hated each other

​    

​   Why?

​   Land!!
    A properties you met here and you'll live to serve and it will exist after you are not

​   At times I ask myself, why must we fight?

​   Are we not of the same name?, **Homo Sapien**s

​   The Arabs hated the Israelis like the worst example in your mind

​   Are they not **Homo Sapiens**?

​   

​   Peace, they say "the best option"

​   But I looked around, nothing in resemblance is found

​   Nothing but war, war and war

​   Can't we just reasoned back?

​   How did we end up in this mess?

​   Where did we get it wrong?

​   Who to blame, who to reward?

​   I think loosing our identity is the source of our problem

​   The identity of being an Human being!

​   Find that and all this will end

​   Agony, wars, misunderstanding, backstabbing

​   Economic instability to name but a few

​   Start the identity power in you,

​   I am a Human being!!
    Shout it loud

​   Victory will be ours

​   Blessed are we, the Homo Sapiens!!

Thanks for reading this small piece of mine, I really appreciate it

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Really well-written poem! Thanks for sharing.

Like the series poem again. Had a mail order bride from Ukraine. Russian interference. LOL. Keep it going man.

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