When you dream with open eyes. A poem
I wrote this poem originally in Spanish last April, but I translated it last night to share it with all of you! I hope you enjoy it!
I dreamed of you
I dreamed of you
two cups from your coffee eyes
a book, with your dreams fulfilled
the sun peeking in your hair.
I dreamed of you
and the moon you keep between your lips
the stars scattered throughout your body
and a fountain full of your fresh laughter.
I dreamed of you
with a "finally" and a magic "maybe"
stealthy, I could peek to your window
and I saw the door of your soul
half-open.
I dreamed of you
you looked at me, you smiled and your hands
like butterflies landed on mine
you caressed my heart, from my fingers.
I dreamed of you
and then...
...then I fell asleep.
¡Bien hecho y muy creativo! Pero pienso que era más bonita en español. Especialmente cuando estaba hablando de la sonrisa de ella. ¡Sigue escribiendo!
Gracias! Pienso publicar también la versión original próximamente. Seguro la disfrutarás más!
beautiful dream