To the rhythm of the water/Original poem [100 Days poetry challenge (Day 91, Poem 89)]

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To the rhythm of the water

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To the rhythm of the water

I have walked at night
to the port
and then to the bay of the beach,
Where the boats
with algae skirt
they dance in a strange
marine fluorescence
to the rhythm of water.

Now it started
suddenly; it's raining,
and there is light in the shadow of heaven.
The thunder continues,
and there is more.
There's tranquility
where the houses make the neighborhood
and the men
they splash in the mud
and they accumulate their forgetfulness.

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Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit

[Day 91, Poem 89/100]
6/06/18

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Original by @corderosiete

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Sadness and resignation are felt in this poetry. But, at the same time, peaks of rhythm. Good job!

Gracias hermana.

Thanks for this poem.
You always know how to put words together

Thank you for reading.

Very good imagery man, like a short movie in my head reading this.
A lot could be deciphered from this.

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