A wish to a shooting star/Original poem [100 Days poetry challenge (Day 90, Poem 88)]
A wish to a shooting star
A wish to a shooting star
under a coincidence moon
I raise my head
to see a shooting star pass by.
I make a wish.
Fiction of my grandparents.
Her whispering body
I listened as the heavenly music
in the melody of the singing crickets.
I inhale the smell of the dress,
and the skin wet with dew
that I see as if I'm floating
in a red hot cloud.
With the melody of the music,
listen to me deeply in you
like thunder that sounds
after the lightning.
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Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit
6/05/18
A shooting star hmm love the topic and the poetry Good write sir
Thanks, friend ehisoria
I love him! It is beautiful how words weave images in our mind. Very suggestive love encounter.
Good!
Thank you sister
Very beautiful man, the red hot cloud part, can you explain? Does it mean love?
Yes friend, it's a love poem.
Speaks to a shooting star in the sky and urges it to give you something to believe. The poem focuses on your need for love and company, I guess.
Yes my friend. You're right.