Sometimes (original poetry edit/redux)clayboyn (70)in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)View this post on Hive: Sometimes (original poetry edit/redux)
this is a good rework. flows better, simpler. the couplets work really well.
I like the old one, but it felt really clunky and like it needed an update. I might do some more, we'll see how this goes.
Sometimes I struggle, the real of myself I need to get off this dusty, dark shelf.
Love this poetry. <3
I think we all struggle some times. <3
I know you're right, my dear.
Sometimes i feel like reading this again and again fantastic poem aye
Thanks for checking out my work! :)
Aye mate im following you already
Love it!! What will be will be!!
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The hair is very wonderful and effective well done, my friend