Glow (original poetry)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)


Observe as you pass, following the glows,

Traces of your soul that my heart follows.

These brilliant blazes, that you leave behind,

Clearing the darkness while freeing the mind.

Compassion for all others that you reach,

Reflecting in the eyes of those you teach.

Glancing just ahead, I see what proceeds,

You follow a path and the glow it bleeds.

Circles of kindness, shining in the night,

Removing the doubt with a blinding light.

Gratitude is shown, wherever you go,

Everything cycles in this endless flow.

Looking back I find, my light also trails,

We're the ouroboros at each other's tails.


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That final line! "We're the ouroboros at each other's tails."

I got a thing for the ouroboros.

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This one is so beautiful, @clayborn. Thank you for sharing.
Love the close...

We're the ouroboros at each other's tails.

I'm glad you like it! <3

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