Gaslight (original poetry)
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9 years ago in #poetry by clayboyn (70)
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Gaslight (original poetry)
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:) Sure.
...In the mood for love. The tempo of this mellow and sentimental like a fine wine, I hear music, I visualize being held as me and my boo two step across the floor. Nobody dancing but us, the music is being played just for us on a warm night by a full moon light. Good Night @clayboyn and bravo for taking me there.
It's strange to me that I was purely writing about gas-lighting and it comes across as a love poem. Interesting to see your thoughts about it though none the less. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
lol you are welcome. But it was all in the tempo, the rhythmic meter.
Reminds me of my boyfriend haha, great work as always.
If you can see the patterns you can break them. Thanks for checking it out!
Purely awesome <3
Good evening... morning @clayboyn!
This poem reminds me of someone I was heavily infatuated with in the past, and how I may not have minded being strung along. Looking back now, it was extremely toxic for me, but when I was in it- I wished that the illusion would last forever.
Your poems terrify me <3
@shello
To be fair, they terrify me sometimes too.
Your poem helped me peek into my past, I'm glad I left it there :3
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