111717 (original poetry)
Often wondering if you feel it too,
Pulled to return to when I first met you.
Truths I can't remember all feel the same,
Is this just a dream or some lonely game?
Everything seems real when I see your eyes,
The only things it seems you can't disguise.
Perhaps it's time we offer up a truce,
I'll let these dreams fade if you cut me loose.
Let go of the past and my self was found,
I can still hear you though you make no sound.
Wandering my thoughts reverb in the night,
But I had to leave and follow the light.
Sometimes I don't know what to comment, especially when a poem really speaks to me.... Top shelf, my friend.... :)
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Oh so poignantly beautiful... But that is what I expect from you this longing and heartache it's so familiar.
Thanks Rose. <3
Creates pictures in my mind!
Great poet @clayboyn, you seem incredibly nostalgic towards someone who was in your life and he/she is no more.
Heya @clayboyn!
Sorry I scare easily :D I loved the part about how the eyes of another don't lie, and although you will remember and cherish this person, you find the meaning of being able to move on. I love your poetry as it shows that simple can still mean amazing.
Keep it up yo!
<3 shello
Your lines are emotional, the rhymes are quite good, and your intentions were heart warmimg, beautiful poetry
Oh these lines...
Perhaps it's time we offer up a truce,
I'll let these dreams fade if you cut me loose.
sigh
i agree with you @sunravelme