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RE: "You, Again?" / Original Poem
seems as through the internal struggle the narrator is confronting is one of contrasting pressure and release, maybe finding self in solitude?
certainly a provocative read, and the film real metaphor at the end there to tie everything together in one extended play is strong, Yahia, well done.
Thank you for sharing, good sir!
You are a sensitive reader, @carmalain7 & pressure/release is a fine way of putting it.
All poetry is a kind of spilling over, after pressure, no? A kind of fine-tuning of exquisite tensions...
As writers, one’s relation to Solitude is conflicted — on the one hand, we need it, to overhear inner world, on another, as social beings, it’s a torment.
Thanks, for your satisfying attentions, my friend.