This poem has an almost ethereal quality to it, @girlbeforemirror.

The openness of a stream-of-consciousness storytelling with the structured consistency that your reoccurring imagery - the poet's eye, their dreams and fears, and their emotional vulnerability - brings, it's all rather brilliant.

The stanza that caught me the most was this:

The colours formed a peacock blue
A performance piece to play,
As the ripples settle
So too does light on splay.

the imagery, tone and wordplay, exceptional!

Thank you so much for sharing & all the best. <3