Clouded Thoughts and a Mind Full of Heavy Light
the untuning of the sky
rain tie the bow
sun save the sight
of an overcast mind
a soft smile
& cloudy eyes
paint my face
shades of you
are the reason
i still wake
every night
not next to
a note that never became anything more
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omg, i'm unequivocally honored @sunravelme, thank you ever so much!!
and thank you @msp-curation for choosing such a dedicated visionary in the lit community to find so many talented writers here - every time she features, i'm so thankful to find new amazing writers to watch.
You all are the best!
Excellent, thanks for the support you give everyone here in this community, Greetings from Venezuela. I hope to run with luck.
Good enough to read a few times , well done, memorable phrasing, unusual.
from someone whose writing i admire as much as yours, Yahia, these words means much and more.
thank you, good sir.
One can tell, even from the thoughtfulness and sensitivity of your comments, as a reader, that you're a writer. I wish you continued success, here and beyond.
Oh my breaking heart. Sigh.
<3
wow....
many thanks for the read, Inna.
gorgeous words. 'the untuning of the sky.' will read more.
Your hand is under a magical spell 100% upvoted and I am following you:))
There's something so deep and warming about the imagery in this one. So much from great simplicity.