Compassion - Poetry by Bruno Treves

in #poetry7 years ago

Many have come before you,
and many will come behind,
many are lost and suffer,
so it is better to be kind.

Many have been punished,
and there are many who still are.
Please forgive their words and actions,
they all do the best they can.

It’s because of their dilemma
that they lie and steal with regret.
Deep inside there is much fear
and with love they won’t be a threat.

Step by step we are all healing,
but this life takes many turns.
We must deal with our own karma
that this fire slowly burns.

With compassion and forgiveness,
let their sins pass by your side.
What you do comes straight back to you.
trust your heart to be your guide.

@BrunoTreves

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Great poetry Bruno, it is as much a story as it is a poem! Keep it up!

Thank you :) :) :)

This is beautiful, I really like it. I used to write poetry when I was young it was a good outlet for me. I hope to read lots more from you.

Thank you, I hope you get back to writing, we all have so much to share! Here is another one of my poems:
https://steemit.com/poetry/@brunotreves/total-transformation-poetry-by-bruno-treves

at Very good. Do not forget to visit my gallery :)

Really nice. As I was reading I could listen the verses as a song. It could be easily musicalized. Good job!

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