The Chips Of Life : Day 256: 5 Minute Freewrite

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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Down across the room, she fries
Day and night packaging, no sleep
Consistency brought her fame, rich
No one knows she started from chips .

Deranged men shouldn't marry
So says mum, an abused woman
She feared dad when angered
For his first wife he cut into chips.

Study to show thyself approved
Peter wouldn't read, a busy fornicator
Booze, smoke, a clergy son
Exam came, he regret, questions cut him into chips .

The safest in the world they say
Vault impenetrable,devices everywhere
world best thief tried his luck
Horror 😱, the laser cut him to chips.

Cry baby, cry. Mum's not here
I moved it closer he freezes
Stretched his hands further, I retract
Louder noise, I quickly gave him chips.

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No chips for me, thanks;-- It's clever poem. ;-)

Wow, this sure was creepy. I loved this bit, in particular:

Deranged men shouldn't marry

Anyway, I knew you'd like to write so here's the prompt for today:
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Nice poem

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