A Moment of Departure...

in #poetry • 6 years ago (edited)

A lot has been happening on Steem ecosystem lately. You can see people taking sides, whining about prices etc but still it is a great place to be. I decided to do something different which i have never done before. Here is my very first attempt at few words of poetry.
It is inspired by few songs and moments of Realism.


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So what if we are separated now?
I know we'll meet again someday

So what if our paths were not meant to end together?
We did spent moment of eternity in a span of single walk together

So what if fate does not want us to be together?
I’m glad that we got to meet atleast

I might hurt you a bit by leaving
But I want you to know, it has never been my intention

I'll just hide my tears behind my smile
Because they are never worth more than your Happiness

So what if it feels like an end?
But nothing will be ever finished between us

So what if we are separated now?
We'll definitely meet again someday...

#art #writing #freewrite #life
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     6 years ago 

    I liked it very much, but unfortunately the translator translates not reliably, but it is still very soulfully written!

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     6 years ago 

    Thank you so much!

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       6 years ago 

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         6 years ago 

        Dear @bluemist

        Hope you don't mind this post (a bit off-topic).

        I know that you delegated some SP to dstors. I'm not sure if you're aware that they seem to shut down their project lately. Just check out their profile and read latest post.

        Guys from dstors didn't even bother to contact people who supported them. Such a shame. This project looked very promissing.

        ps.
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        Perhaps you could consider supporting our efforts with some delegation? I would seriously appreciate your help.

        Please let me know what do you think. I will appreciate every feedback, regardless of your decision.

        Yours
        Piotr

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           6 years ago 

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             6 years ago 

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               6 years ago 

              Hi @BlueMist

              Excellent choice of topic. Indeed there is so much happening in Steem ecosystem lately. Interesting times.

              I'm not good with poetry so it's hard for me to comment it. Is there some hidden message in your piece?

              ps. thank you for reaching out to me via Discord.

              Yours
              Piotr

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                 6 years ago 

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                   6 years ago 

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