I get good sleep
I wake as warrior
Not worrier for day drama
But optimist to eat the light
I feed as hard as I can
I burp and be thankful
Everyday above ground
Better be a good day
Else life is moot
Your word play is so clever and effective. Shows complete contrasts of weak, strong, darkness, light (eating enlightenment perhaps), wrong, right.. and it all ends in characteristic positivity and wisdom. Uplifting
Awesome poetry and picture i like this.
thanks
Your word play is so clever and effective. Shows complete contrasts of weak, strong, darkness, light (eating enlightenment perhaps), wrong, right.. and it all ends in characteristic positivity and wisdom. Uplifting
Thanks much for your poetic feedback
To eat light, is to live lightly ;) . Upvote given.
Thanks for the upvote
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