Snap, Crackle, Pop
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Fantastic poem this one. It was a pleasure to work on!
I just hope this need to write poetry doesn't continue. It's so distracting. I'm supposed to wake up with STORIES in my head!
I loved the first cut of this, but the edited version really... pops!
This is so well written (and edited) that it made me quite uncomfortable and queasy. I could feel my bones pop and snapping and I do not like it one bit!
The "infernal racket" was a great phrase. It emphasises how hellish the experience must be.
interesting bro.
very nice work.. go on