there is no fish...bacus15 (48)in #poetry • 8 years ago there is no fish in a drop of water there is no mouse in a grain of wheat there is no camel in a granule of sand things just multiply to happen Poem by Bacus15 Photo from Pixabay #life #nature
fish shimmer, liquid as water
hordes of rushing mice, teeming grains flowing through the tilting mill
hissing sands flow, then hump in defiance
against solar desert winds
pray for stillness
perceive only movement
that's the space between words
Interesting ending. Yes, there is, or there at least could be space between words. Physical one, meaty one.
Interesting ending can't say that I saw it coming.
Interesting. For i see ending as a logical conclusion. Thank you for nice words :) .
wonderful expression of infinity
Thank you!