The feeling~ / POEM

athenabree08 (57)in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

I wrote this poem when I was really sad. I watched the water and listened to the nice calm water. It made me relax and I became happy.

I look at the smooth and slow flowing water. I wonder what it would be like to move forward and never look back. Or never stay or be in the same place twice.

I can stand there for hours just to watch the water and to hear the water.
I see my reflection.
As I watch my reflection in the water I see my sad expression and wonder if the water can see me.

I run my fingers through the water.
I see many ripples appear as if the water is flinching from the pain I'm causing it.
I wonder if the water can feel me.........feel my pain.

I wish I could float on the water and let it carry me anywhere and everywhere it goes.

I step into the water. I feel the coolness of the water and I start to shiver.
I feel my body relaxing,
I feel my heart go from racing to free falling.
I concentrate on the sunny and blue sky.
I start to float.
I feel the water pass by me
I realize that nothing in the world can take away this feeling..........The feeling of being happy.

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7 years ago in #poetry by athenabree08 (57)

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leslyfay (55) 7 years ago

nice poem

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lemongrab (49) 7 years ago

Absolutely beautiful! Gave me a great big smile!

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athenabree08 (57) 7 years ago

Thanks 😊

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mamu77 (52) 7 years ago (edited)

Nice poetry, taking the "water"subject,bUt reflects more thoughts...

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athenabree08 (57) 7 years ago

Thanks @mamu77

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mamu77 (52) 7 years ago

Welcome

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jhanmervz (54) 7 years ago

Really nice poem. :)

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athenabree08 (57) 7 years ago

Thank you ☺

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