The feeling~ / POEM
I wrote this poem when I was really sad. I watched the water and listened to the nice calm water. It made me relax and I became happy.
I can stand there for hours just to watch the water and to hear the water.
I see my reflection.
As I watch my reflection in the water I see my sad expression and wonder if the water can see me.
I run my fingers through the water.
I see many ripples appear as if the water is flinching from the pain I'm causing it.
I wonder if the water can feel me.........feel my pain.
I wish I could float on the water and let it carry me anywhere and everywhere it goes.
I step into the water. I feel the coolness of the water and I start to shiver.
I feel my body relaxing,
I feel my heart go from racing to free falling.
I concentrate on the sunny and blue sky.
I start to float.
I feel the water pass by me
I realize that nothing in the world can take away this feeling..........The feeling of being happy.
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nice poem
Absolutely beautiful! Gave me a great big smile!
Thanks 😊
Nice poetry, taking the "water"subject,bUt reflects more thoughts...
Thanks @mamu77
Welcome
Really nice poem. :)
Thank you ☺
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It did make my day. Thank you very much. This is brilliant and soulful
Thank you @ihuomastephen
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