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She fell away, way down,
Away and around.

Sun in her eyes,
Falling beyond my reach…

Sun trails spilling from her eyes
Flashing prismatic rainbows,
She grabs at the clouds.

No scream.
No sound.
No echo.

Just tears.

So unkind it seems,
As her smile turns to sand…

Once a child learning to stand…
Beaming upturned face wondering at the sun…

Child undone by the wind and rain,
Pretty ribbons drifting loose, floating towards the shore,
Once reflected in the sparkle of her brand new eyes,
Have faded beyond memories grasp…

Written 10/24/2007
© 2007 Mirror aka @as-i-see-it (All rights reserved)

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     7 years ago 

    very sensitive poem
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      What a beautiful composition!

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        Very nice :)

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          super

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             7 years ago 

            Very poignant... You have done it again . Every poem has that one line or thought that lifts it . "Child undone by the wind and rain,......
            Once reflected in the sparkle of her brand new eyes,
            Have faded beyond memories grasp…"
            Beautiful line. So poignantly they express the pain of growing up and the loss of innocence :)

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             7 years ago 

            Thank you my friend.

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            Wishing you happiness and excellent health! :-)

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               7 years ago 

              my pleasure. You are most welcome :) . You write well :)

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                Thanks. Sometimes I write better than at other times and visa versa. :-)

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                   7 years ago 

                  Amazing friend..

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                  Thank you very much for your comment, it is truly appreciated! :-)

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                     7 years ago 

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