Poetry: A wide view
This is a poem I wrote which shows that the world has alot more to offer than sadness and sorrows.
THE WIDE VIEW.
Looking at the World from my point of view,
Seems like the bad things are just a few,
Change is what we want
But must people fail to see that we are the tool,
Took a review of everything we've accomplished
We made mistakes and that work can't be refurbished,
A vast range of ideas have been abolished,
Encouragement is a key we must obtain,
So others effort won't be in vain
In life some things must occur,
Just for you to know you're now on the shore,
Your destiny sometimes might not be sure,
But all we can do is to keep on believing it's secure,
The right path is never a straight path,
Life ain't no fairy tale and no one's a stranger,
Better days are ahead, that is sure
But the world works in ways that ain't pure.
I am open to correction on quotation errors and others.
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STOPNice one more tin who wrote it 😂😂😂
Hello aruyacy
Not only was your poem poetic and inspiring also your poem pin pointed the road to success, optimistic that at the end of the tunnel it will turn out for good.
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