I have gone back from here to examine a number of your poems. You write a variety of poems that shows you have creative ideas, but almost all your poems have one fatal flaw.

I bet you think of it as your style of writing, but actually, if you were submitting your poems to a teacher of poetry, he would tell you the same, it is a flaw, not a style.

Part of writing a poem is in having the ability to touch your reader and grab a corner of his imagination and emotions.

You cannot do that by repeating the same line, again and again, even if you change it slightly now and then:

having the ability to touch your reader and grab a corner of his imagination and emotions.

Did my repeating myself contribute anything? Apart from it serving as an example of why you should not keep on repeating yourself - no, none at all.

I guess you are annoyed with me, but please, go back and read the last five poems you have written and now that I have drawn your attention to what you are doing, you'll see it for yourself.

It is a pity, for otherwise, I like your writing.

I'll follow for a while, just to see if you try to improve. If you do, I'll continue and encourage you when I can.