"War" My Original Poem
Now see off me, get release of
your loving shadows.
It has been long days ,
been secured by your affection .
It is the time to go ,
the world challenging me,
Want to withstand all odds ,
see off me ,see off me.
If I win , sure come to your blessings.
Or find the perpetual path of immortality.
You know I never defeated never defeated.
Man Down. :D Nice poem.
Hang in there. I'm following you!
thank you. following you too :)
It's just awesome. It touches my heart.
thank you @angelshare for your kind comment :)
Very touching....
thnx :D
que bonito :)
thank you :)
Inspired
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Namaste! Very nice poem, you have a new follower!
We are indomitable! Continue on the perpetual path of immortality indeed!