In my dream.....
In my dream
The sky becomes the earth
Fish fly and birds crawl
Stories sang and songs told
Stars laugh to the jokes of the Sun
The galaxy searches a lost planet
In my dreams, where love is balance and fair
Where darkness hangs above and light abides within
Where understanding is rare and wisdom sacred
Remind me to bring the dust of the dreamland when I return
The End.
I wrote this poem at that moment I was giving up on the hope for a better world and fairer humanity. When do we stop being human and when do we lost the love that abides within.... Though it doesn't seem like better days might come, but it lies within us
In our heart we begin to create a better world we hope for, by allowing love abide within us[14925685_1100013253386156_806775280741791601_n.jpg(
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I enjoy the mood created by this work. The immediate introduction of such oddities as flying fish and crawling birds informs the reader that we are in a world turned upside down without coming right out and saying it. I love that. And how it progresses into a deeper insights on the nature of wisdom and understanding is powerful. It leaves one to think that if in an upside down dream these virtues are valued then how do we value them in our right side up reality? Good thoughts to think on. Well done!
Thank you @evansjames I love your sound analysis, I so much appreciate
I particularly love the picture. Welldone
Thank you @mybravewealth