SteemitPoetryContest #14 - Your words

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Your words.

I was there that November
when you ended everything for us.
You think I don't remember?
Or is just you don't want to discuss?


You explained all I needed
in that purple note that you sent,
you though that you succeeded,
but my heart is made of cement.


You treated me like a king,
I didn't think I would find a third,
loving you was amazing,
but now, I don't believe a word.


Author: @andresfer0310


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This is my entry for the Steemit Poetry Contest #14 ! Sponsored by @terrycraft. It's my first poem in English in my whole life! So please, if you have any suggestions let me know down in the comments! We all learn from mistakes :).


I really hope you guys enjoyed this poem ! Thanks for watching! Any upvote or comment is happily accepted ;).


Regards and Steem On!

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It is hard to cover such topics when you are limited by length and the need to rhyme for a contest, but you do it well in this one. Good Luck :)

Thanks @calluna! I read your poem too, and I really like it ;). The best wishes and luck for you too!

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