Triumph - an original poem by Andy LoughneysteemCreated with Sketch.

in #poetry8 years ago


Found an idol in the river

He was sitting on a turtle

So I put him in my pocket

And brought him to my mantle


I offered him my senses

Tried to be a thoughtful giver

Filled my head with what he wanted

And forgot about the river


My home got awful cluttered

By the gifts for bringing solace

Had to move outside my comfort

And embrace the things I'd missed


When I woke up the next morning

And my blessings broke with day

Felt a love outside my body

Felt there was no need to pray


Brought my idol to the river

And with purpose left him there

Caught a glimpse of all my follies

Floating gently through the air


So I gave away my tension

And redemption flowed beneath

Then I skipped a stone towards my home

And let the ripples flood my bones


But my heart sank with the stone

I thought I threw away my magic

So I plunged into the deep

To find resistance to the tragic


When I burst out of the water

I raised my rock up to the sky

Now it sits upon my mantle

Don't you know that I touch it every single time that I pass by?


Sometimes twice!


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Working on turning this into a song....stay tuned!

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I was going to ask if this was a song, actually I had to backspace, haha! I'm not sure why we haven't met yet, I've been trying to get to know and promote the music community so when my brother finally joins I can get him started with ease :) He's a singer, songwriter who plays acoustic guitar and harmonica, I've posted a number of video of him on my page. He'd be signed up here already but he just made me the aunt of a beautiful baby girl, so he's just a teensy bit busy! Also I'm a huge fan of @papa-pepper whom I think represents the community feeling of the steemit community, loved the short, resteemed it!
Your name is familiar so I must have seen you in the open-mic contests, but I'm going to check out some of your stuff when I'm done writing this novel in your comments, lol! And of course I will be following you now :) Oh and, I loved the poem!

Hey thanks! Definitely see you around too, especially promoting your brother. Yah, new baby is time consuming! I like his style tho, saw that last vid of him playing with a bassist and playing some harmonica.

Glad you liked the collaboration with @papa-pepper! It was loads of fun. Thanks for following, I'll follow you back!

Very nice friend. Love it, and yes a song would be great to share into steemit.

Thank you kindly and keep an eye for the song, for sure!

definitely will! Keep writing!

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