Triumph - an original poem by Andy Loughney
Found an idol in the river
He was sitting on a turtle
So I put him in my pocket
And brought him to my mantle
I offered him my senses
Tried to be a thoughtful giver
Filled my head with what he wanted
And forgot about the river
My home got awful cluttered
By the gifts for bringing solace
Had to move outside my comfort
And embrace the things I'd missed
When I woke up the next morning
And my blessings broke with day
Felt a love outside my body
Felt there was no need to pray
Brought my idol to the river
And with purpose left him there
Caught a glimpse of all my follies
Floating gently through the air
So I gave away my tension
And redemption flowed beneath
Then I skipped a stone towards my home
And let the ripples flood my bones
But my heart sank with the stone
I thought I threw away my magic
So I plunged into the deep
To find resistance to the tragic
When I burst out of the water
I raised my rock up to the sky
Now it sits upon my mantle
Don't you know that I touch it every single time that I pass by?
Sometimes twice!
Working on turning this into a song....stay tuned!
I was going to ask if this was a song, actually I had to backspace, haha! I'm not sure why we haven't met yet, I've been trying to get to know and promote the music community so when my brother finally joins I can get him started with ease :) He's a singer, songwriter who plays acoustic guitar and harmonica, I've posted a number of video of him on my page. He'd be signed up here already but he just made me the aunt of a beautiful baby girl, so he's just a teensy bit busy! Also I'm a huge fan of @papa-pepper whom I think represents the community feeling of the steemit community, loved the short, resteemed it!
Your name is familiar so I must have seen you in the open-mic contests, but I'm going to check out some of your stuff when I'm done writing this novel in your comments, lol! And of course I will be following you now :) Oh and, I loved the poem!
Hey thanks! Definitely see you around too, especially promoting your brother. Yah, new baby is time consuming! I like his style tho, saw that last vid of him playing with a bassist and playing some harmonica.
Glad you liked the collaboration with @papa-pepper! It was loads of fun. Thanks for following, I'll follow you back!
nice work
thank you
Very nice friend. Love it, and yes a song would be great to share into steemit.
Thank you kindly and keep an eye for the song, for sure!
definitely will! Keep writing!