Mortals

amberox (31)in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

Hey, this is just a short poem and my first creative piece on here. Thumbs up it goes well xD

We live and die. we are mere humans.. mortals.
The warm red blood running through my veins.
I am Adams child.
Eves daughter.
Gods creation.
Bound by clay.
Sculptured by the greatest.
Contained by my spirit.
Lightened by my soul.
Human. Blood, flesh and bone human.

Hope you enjoyed it. :)

#religion #poem #blog #life

7 years ago in #poetry by amberox (31)

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moonleesteem (59) 7 years ago

Very nice poem, I really enjoyed it

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amberox (31) 7 years ago

Thanks! 😊

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adeyemofemi (32) 7 years ago

nice!

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amberox (31) 7 years ago

Thanks:)

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) 7 years ago

This poem was exquisite, I love the innovations and ideals you used within it...
Really good keep it up!

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amberox (31) 7 years ago (edited)

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it 😊

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greatness96 (69) 7 years ago

Wow! Nice, I'm following u for more

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amberox (31) 7 years ago

Aw thank you! I'll follow back:)

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kylaki (54) 7 years ago

Thanks that was a nice read!

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amberox (31) 7 years ago

Thanks for the feedback!

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tracey-annmair (44) 7 years ago

Nice but Don't forget you are also a soul🙄

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amberox (31) 7 years ago (edited)

Don't worry I'm also very soulful haha

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himshweta (60) 7 years ago

I believed poetries should rhyme? Isn't it?

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amberox (31) 7 years ago

I believe a poet should write their own work, Unlike yourself lmao don't comment on my page at all.

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himshweta (60) 7 years ago

I have everything original on my page miss.

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