My smile

in #poetry7 years ago

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I thought I knew you,
With words you trusted me,
and now that?
Just disappointment after everything I gave you.
I keep my smile,
Something stingy,
Something innocent,
Something sad.

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Excellent work dear friend @ alevale1010 with a fan of poetry, I tried several times but I'm frustrated not being able to achieve a rhyme
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem

Thank you, and it is not easy one makes your effort. You will do it and you will see

Nice photo my friend I really like your writing, thank you for sharing it and I hope you continue showing us more of your work! I hope you have a good Friday!

Thank you very much, although to be honest I did not have it

I knew I loved you, before we met, I never saw 'til you vanished, my heart was broken, as I was banished :(

Very nice verse

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