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RE: Vigil for Meaning
I know those ''somewhere else'' feelings.... and you just , well go with it!! :]
I love how you have divided your poem into chapters this time!...
Silence. Tickling sounds of day.
Unwisdom in a sharp mortality.
Bliss looms in the dull light.
my favorite lines, I almost feel like I would write them myself , I love the idea of happiness among the bleak in poetry!