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RE: "Into The Ocean Where Darkness Shines" --- original poem
When I read this I think of how vast , big and powerful the ocean is in comparison to you, the spectator as you just tip the surface mass in which the ocean has to offer !!!..{or has not to offer}.. since the 'Moss-covered rocks' seemed to be sizing you up as it eyed your aura.
It particularly gave me a sense of uneasiness as I have fear of the sea, so the whole poem was an edgy one for me :]
& I do love the last photograph the best, I love the flow of the water, as it falls and drops so freely, & the fact we really have no control over it , it gives the idea that sea has ..life!
Wonderful as always, Thank You!!
@aineyann, thanks a lot for that feedback, and I know what you mean about the fear of the ocean! I love the ocean yet I still fear it at the same time, it is so massive and could swallow a human so easily...
I'm glad you enjoyed the photo of the waterfalls... that's a special place to me, somewhere I can go to recharge and be alone with nature. The cool water seems so healing and there is a constant breeze from the downward flow of the current.
I appreciate your comment :)