Awesome, thanks for sharing your work. Your metaphors are great, and you tell a good story. I felt like you used the word 'like' too much, but maybe that was intentional. I'm new to this and hope to start posting some poetry too, I've got a few saved on my drive. Peace out, I'll keep a lookout for more of your poetry :)
Thank you! I had one of those creative moments an it just flowed out of me. The 'likes' were intentional. When I was reading it out loud the likes give it a kick.
Right on I'll keep an eye out for your work.