Slain Devil - Poem

in #poetry6 years ago


For a moment he considered mercy
But looking at the devil in his white coat
He couldn't hold back
So he took his bat and swung it
Bones cracked, ribs broke
Teeth smashed, and blood pooled out

He swung and swung and swung
Until they was nothing left but a puddle of blood and bones
Finally, the devil was dead and he could move on

Except his journey thus far had led him to become something else
Something he dreaded
Something he just killed

He had become the devil.

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Nice one, take a look at my poems @atikajayboy

Just went through your collection, they are awesome!

Nice poem. He became what he just killed

Yeah. He became the devil.
Thanks for your kind words

I like this poetry, nice one bro

Many thanks bro

Nice poem. Satan cause his own downfall.

@seyiodus.

More like he reincarnated

Nice poem but wrong tag...please always post in the right tag...promo-steem is a wrong tag for this post, while Christianity tag is missing.

Thanks for the advice.
Btw, it isn't a religious post.

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