Poemchallenge By @margaretwise; Unsung Song {An Original Poetry + Analysis & Literary Appreciations}
from the firmament of grace
and harmonious gyration engouled
in pure intentions but arraigned to slain
eyes subjected to teary betrayals
and the heart to consistent sobbing
freedom held captive by daunting fetters.
my unsung song of pain and regrets
stuttered voice for a broken mindset
throbbing beautiful hearts with flying daggers
and cruising the soul with pricky letters
from detonating sentences and eruptic volcanoes of thoughts
like a sombre catastrophic overflow in a tea cup.
never to be heard, echoes of damnation
fretting the soul to shreds, voices crackle to strain
upon hummed verses of cacophonic threnody
I became as dead leaf sounds rustled and mesmerized by the night wind
and as songbirds on duty call, twitching the night into a melodious hymn
only to disappear at the advent of the morning.
like a yellow leaf deficient of chlorophyll
and whirlwind denied direction.
I became as tragedy in frequented dirges
sung till the soul breaks and voice can sing no more.
Behold my unsung song;
song of lamentations and unbearable afflictions
songs with no lyrics,
song on silent tracks sung only with bodily expression.
Poetic Notes & Analysis
"Unsung song" is written in a very tragic pattern and unfolds events that depicts a life usurped by pain and afflictions. A eye that has cried to cry no more. A song with no lyrics....a song so hidden, forbidden to be sang yet expressed explicably bodily. The poet's action and expression justifies the song. Song never outspoken but yet so loud; the pain is rendered in a song melodiously and meticulous. Tragic and ironic, right?
This poetry is an extension of a poet's thought depicting damages caused by unrelenting pain and agony. The poet finds it hard to sing or think of a joyous song or moment without an abrupt intercession by negativities. The poet has sang dirges upon dirges, even tragic lullabies to an extent that it set him into a new dimension of thinking, expression of the pain felt and a thirst for a final resolve...suicide?
by @aduragbemi
06/09/2018.
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Nicely written Buddy, well done 😀😀😀
Thanks pal. Am glad you liked it! I got the theme inspiration from you...lol
Poems are born from natural languages, fed through the umbilical cord of sounds and meanings.
Let the poetic wings lift your wonderful aura into the most beautiful secrets of poetry.
Thank you :)
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Great writing I am honored @margaretwise