FALLEN BEYOND REDEMPTION [AN ORIGINAL POETRY]
- Take heed and listen carefully,
Who will plead my case?
Let them come,
That they may see that which is lost,
With opened eyes,
That they may see through the lies,
To behold what was,
Before all became muddled up. - I was once an angel but now fallen,
Ferried to destruction,
all for pride,
Dishonesty and denial,
Judged for all eternity with no trials,
Alone and broken,
Bored so much pain even a millennium. - Curse is immortality,
With no love to keep company,
Wretched is the life with no purpose,
As it continues in an endless loop,
Triggered by a solemn vow,
A voice, an echo that quakes
From the beginning through the ages,
A hand that causes unrest for evils,
Makes hell dwelling place of the devil. - Alas, I was bounded
With all my tentacles cut short,
My fang has lost it potency,
If only judgement will prevail with clemency. - Maybe, just maybe
I could turn the hands of clock,
To right my wrongs,
But it's too late now,
I'm no human that repents,
I'm guilty and condemned,
Forgotten and forever damned.
By
@aduragbemi
20/05/2018
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This is a very profound poem. Thanks for sharing it. I just wrote about something similar. I love how descriptive you write. It's very rich in vision.
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