I love how you didn't use periods in this piece, for me it helped with the flow and the rhythmic word choice, I really want to hear this piece spoken aloud. Great job.
I love how you didn't use periods in this piece, for me it helped with the flow and the rhythmic word choice, I really want to hear this piece spoken aloud. Great job.
Thanks... I wonder how it will sound myself. If I ever do (occupied with school at the moment), I'll let you know. Thanks again for the feedback.