Poetic-surge Poetry Contest (Emptiness)
I was born into this world with emptiness
I seek, i couldn't find
I Serve my purpose, i couldn't make it
Find my mate, but nobody to make friend with me
Fight my battles but no one could fight it with me
Mind all that concerns me
i was born to this world to rise my head and
the next minute my world was empty
my heart was empty
I feel pain in my life
People live differently for different reasons
Actualizing every ounce of strength they have life
Being watched by every eye, every move i make, people criticize
Always left broken, alone and afraid after being tormented
Slowly demons search for my soul
This is nice and portrays your feelings that despite criticism,, you still live with an essence....stick around as you improve your writing skills,,,,soon we will have a discord channel,,,, i hope to see you regularly
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