POEMCHALLENGE RESULTS by margaretwise :) "Poetry is a picture of feelings and thoughts written in words." 🗝🚪✍🏻 - I invite you next Friday, join us :)

margaretwise (67)in #poemchallenge • 6 years ago

Hello, my Dear Steemers.
Undoubtedly, poetry is an art that surprises and fascinates. It often shows how to live and what to look for. I believe that every person should find time to read poetry, a reflection on its meaning.

Here is another day of captivating poetry created by these extraordinary people.

"Poetry, even seemingly the most fantastic, is always a rebellion against artificiality, rebellion, in a sense, against reality."

James Joyce

I would like to say thank you to all of you who were participating in the Challenge and also those who were interested in poemchallenge. I am delighted with your interest in poetry that shows how beautiful hearts and souls are among us. :)

The words that spoke to my heart and stirred my emotions.

@prechyrukky

We keep on changing

We keep on changing
Just like we evolve from being homoerectus to homosapien
Just like we stop being primitive and became advance
Just as we stop bending and start standing straight

We are evolving
Our flipped phones are now the past we are in the era of touch screen
Our black and white tv is gone, flat screen tv is the new
Our buggy trousers are no longer invoke but fitted trousers

Years pass by like water
Slow and gentle but fast with a hidden speed
A fast speed that evolves the world
A fast speed that changes us either for the good or bad

To the next generation, we will be called "old school"
Just as we called the previous generation
We are on an unending transit
We are evolving

https://steemit.com/poemchallenge/@prechyrukky/poem-challlenge-with-margaretwise-29c94ccadd393
Here you can check the other posts:

https://steemit.com/@prechyrukky

@josediccus

BLOOD ON SNOWFLAKES

Standing, in stinking swords
smoking shrubs and fermented blood,
the world is but like gall,
to the sweetness of a newborn smile,
a carthasis lacking ambiguities,
smeared by guilty conscience
lying wasting away are but dreams,
snuffed out like pimples,
in the very cheek,
to never blink like the blinkard

We're soldiers with no livers
soiled boots and heavy hearts
wavering and dishing death,
like a palatable dinner,
we're like omelettes in the battlefield,
mashed and meshed by unexpectations,
while waiting wearily for the rain
the air we feed, is an elixir,
that conveys tomorrow's uncertainty
unknown to the soul

We're harbingers,
the terse tears that flows,
after the scolding of the onions,
Jerusalem is burnt to the brims,
like a regalia soaked in soot,
we're far away into the skies,
unaware of gravity's cruelty
humbling us to reproach,
like a crash landing eagle

We have seen valleys and plain lands,
seen speeding spears,
sweetly and sporadically shooting,
the eyes is like a hawk,
with imageries of the good and ugly,
our smiles, a weapon to cloak our dirtiness
but the wind is a revealers,
spreading our secrets like apparels
to the dingy eyes of the sunset

https://steemit.com/poetry/@josediccus/blood-on-snowflakes-an-original-poetry-0c012e7989165

Here you can check the other posts:

https://steemit.com/@josediccus

I hope you enjoy reading these poems as much as I did. I'd like to invite you to next PoemChallenge next Friday, open the wing and write to my dear friends.

I hope you have enjoyed !!!

Thank you for visiting and supporting my work and those great poets who are among us. My heart always deeply appreciates your friendly words and love of poetry.

Poemchallenge rules:

How to find your poem and help to find great Steemians:

Add the name : "poemchallenge by @margaretwise".

The challenge is on Friday.

Add below the tag name "poemchallenge" or add your link under the invitation to poemchallenge so I don’t loose your words.

To built bigger community of remarkable poetry please resteem the post. Thank you for your support and helping to spread the poemchallenge to find more excellent writers.

I am expecting poems on Friday and Saturday. On Sunday I accept only if they appear before giving poetic results, which I always announce in the afternoon of my time.

My time is "Currently Central European Time (CET)"

Prizes:

First place The best poem 100% upvote and resteem by me and @gregbit + 1 STEEM
second place 100% upvote by me and @gregbit. Resteem only by me

Third place 100% upvote and resteem by me. 20% upvote by @gregbit

Have fun my dear don't be afraid to use your imagination, try to believe in yourself and share with us your beauty from your heart. :-))

Good luck .

Thank you for your support :)

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