Destiny’s Mess - Original Poem -Original Artwork
We were so in tune together, feels like destiny.
She hums my song like it is her own
Now, I feel like I am back to being alone.
So distant and estranged.
Was it my own doing or is there someone else?
I can’t help notice that my effort now fails.
Even the twinkling of her eyes is so apparent
The music she now enjoys,
A different tempo, glowing like Helen of Troy.
“To whom have you learnt dancing?”
These words I asked
But she answered with full-face masked.
And I could no longer get hold of her to where she has drifted
I know that from the moment she met him,
He will always be in between
So, I guess, I can still ask her to marry me instead.
Maybe she will say “YES”
Knowing that she and him are stuck in destiny’s mess.
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Oh my God! This is the first time I've seen you post a poem! Destiny's Mess indeed. It's pretty sad once destiny screws us over, and I mean it does screw us big time. And the artwork is really amazing as well... I definitely loved it @valerie15, great job.
@jamesanity06, thank you!
Breaks my heart just to read this... i'll be suicidal if this happened to my relationship...
Thank you @sam.hsuu! Destiny often screws us over. Well, it happens. Thanks for dropping by!
everything changes all the time
Yep, sadly it does. I just hope that such changes are for the better.
I love, love, love how this turned out @valerie15 🙂 Fantastic writing ✍
Waaah! I just read your comment @raj808 and hearing such kind words from you is truly overwhelming. Thank you for helping me out with this poem. Thank you, really.
Stuck forever :)
Hi @futurethinker! Thank you for dropping by! Ugh, destiny and its intricacies. Life!
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Thank you so much Ohana!
It's a beautiful piece
Ahahahaha lowbat ba? Thank you! @maverickinvictus
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Congratulations on having this poem OCD-ed. I'm happy and proud for you @valerie15.
Thanks @jamesanity06!This would not be possible without you r help.
I hope you are okay and everything is well.
Nah, nothing's okay, and everything's a mess.
I'm sorry :(
Don't be, this is all on me...