Universe Divide- Original Poetry- The U.S.S. MinnowPROSE!
And curling into the embrace
Of universal growth
Batting stardust
From their eyelashes
And observing
Worlds that crumble
Under the thumbs of man
It started with tiny cracks
And little lags
Small tears that frayed
And then it all gave way
Flashes of light
Heat and flame
Tiny screams all snuffed out
Eyes filled with galaxies
Looking on
In silence
Scowling at the endless
Senseless
Destruction
Wipe it out
Finish the job
It will all be reclaimed.
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Hi @sammosk, wonderful post. I was particularly struck by this line:
"Looking on
In silence
Scowling at the endless
Senseless
Destruction"
Looking beyond style and poetry, is this not just a place along the way? All apart of the universe's grand design?
I raise these question assuming that I even know the message you are trying to convey.
thanks, happy today
Great poem, With the out of space content
Ouch!
O.k. this poem is many things at the same time, I'll tell you what I saw (which, of course, could be very different from the poet's)
Someone's been watching...all along. From the beginning when the damage wasn't too severe till when the only things seemingly left to do was for this outside force complete the chaos started.
The whole imagery of the cosmos and galaxies and universe and stuff, it's all too real bro.
Like this is the kinda poem I write after seeing an astronomical documentary.
Asides from the fact that your first stanza was not properly spaced from the line-divide mark down you used (hence the first stanza being in bigger fonts than the rest of the poem), I see no other mistake needing of correction.
Good poem bro...or ma'am 😁
Wow! Have been reading between this lines over over, amazing you were able to hit it just at the edge, seriously i almost got lost while trying to get the analysis. You are just so good, by the way i also do poetry and am new to steemit, you can check me out i recently made a poem for mothers
I will.
@sammosk, please what is the rationale for this piece of art?