You took me by storm!

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

I think we all have things we remember and wish we wrote down, or things that can be put into a story and you can play around with.

That is what I did here and I got inspired by @katrina-ariel as she always write such amazing poems and stories... And she always say... Go for it... Try it... So I did.

I don't have the way of words even close to the way she does, but I hope its readeble anyways 🙈 this is truly out of my comfort zone but... To late now right?

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Love at the sea!

My first time

The sun had just set on the horizon,
The sky a splash of pink, blue and yellow, like a magical painting.
The ocean reflected the sky.
I reached out my hand to touch it,
But just made small waves that tickled my naked body.

A noise made me jump.
A crackling of a bush , footsteps getting closer now touching the sand. What was that?
I froze, unable to move, no longer alone.

The wind made the treetops dance,
And the sound of the leaves suddenly felt scary.
Not even the bird song could calm me down.

I waited for the footsteps to fade,
but they got louder.
And a dark figure approached.
I turned away, covering myself.

"What are you doing here alone at night?" a deep voice said

I'd heard that deep voice before, and I knew before I turned that it was HIM.
The one that took my heart by storm but I was to afraid to admit.

There he was in all his glory,
only wearing tight shorts that didn't leave much for the imagination.
A towel hanging down his left shoulder and the moonlight reflecting his smiling face and wild hair.
My lips got dry and I found it hard to breathe.

I couldn't believe it.
The same guy that captured my heart in secret,
Standing right in front of me.
Was I dreaming? This couldn't be real.
Thoughts tore through my mind as I heard him say "I been waiting for you"

My heart skipped a bit as he approached.
Swoosh sound of the waves filled my ears,
The silhouette of his chest was spellbinding.
I closed my eyes in Anticipation, and waited...

His touch sent electric fire through my bloodstream
My breath went heavy, deep,
My heart threatened to beat out of my chest.

My lips slid unconsciously apart, and what happened next set my body alight

The KISS, soft, gentle, soon deepened as he pulled me closer.
Our tongues danced and explored each other's sweetness

His hand tickled my back as his fingers followed my spine
I held my breath and a unconscious moan escaped through my open mouth as his fingers grazed my breast.
A groan from his throat made me smile!

My whole body pulled in, longing to get closer.
Like he knew how I felt,
He shed the last obstacle between our burning bodies.

We explored every inch, deep connection with kisses and fingers that made us gasp for air.
Water caressed our bodies like a feathers touch, and nature was our stage.

I pulled him close, No fear of this being my first time, letting him in.
Pain turned into pleasure, rhythm with the waves added intensity, our breath mingled with the sound of the ocean.
Nature was caressing us with touches and sounds that filled all our senses.

Deeper, harder, our rhythm quickened.
I felt every inch of him pounding,
Setting my bloodstream on fire.
Couldn't get enough of him,
The smell of him was addictive.
Made me longing for more.

He grazed his hands on my butt cheeks, like he knew, pushed me hard into him with a moaning sound escaped through his lips.
Heavy breathing mingled with the wind,
one with nature, connected as two hearts beating as one.

What I thought would scare me only deepened the connection,
The excitement was like Lightning in my blood.
I pressed myself closer, into him, our trembling reflected in the moonlight,
When the release finally came, the ocean crashed with us.

We stayed tangled together, with legs entwined, arms in embrace, listening to the wind. Unwilling to let go!

Love in the moon Light.. You took me by Storm!

Original writing by @saffisara

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Not like my original posts but sometimes you got to break the rules right?
Thank you for reading 🙏

Thank you @katrina-ariel for your amazing input and support I appriciate You!

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Okay now you making me daydream and it is not good for my health 😂😂....that's an amazing poem and an interesting one at that 😉@saffisara.

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Awww.. Making you daydream? That is The sweetest comment and makes me happy to hear 😉 but I also apolagize if I messed with your head 🙏 hoping your health stays stable... Lol

Thank you for your comment and Im glad you liked it my friend.
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You sure messed with my head 😛 but in a good way lol. Enjoy the weekend sweets. 😘😘

Ohh.. Good.. Then I can relax 😁 lol
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There are no rules in poetry, despite what some hard-nosed people may try and tell you - it is art, and cannot be judged. Either a person likes it, or they don't. This one is awesome!

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Well said.. Still I have much to learn 😜 but glad you liked it and coming from a true write like yourself it means alot 🙏💖 Thank you!

Most welcome sweets, keep at it if it's a passion, great way to express oneself :)

Ohh.. Im working on it 😜 lol
Always loved to write but I know to make posts and be crazy, but to actually write a poem or story is another thing and I try to learn 😉 so I Will Edit this and hope with help it Will be more alive

I'm jealous, never had any moments like that. Bravo on the revisions to cater to the english speaking people sweets ;)

Well truth is, althogh it is a true story its also fiction fixed... Mix of how it was and what I wished for... So I wished for this myself 😋 but it was a moment I remember for sure.
Glad you liked it and I try my best to write Great english but some words I just don't get right... Lol

What an incredible setting! I love this moment. Thank you for sharing it, it's like out of a fairy tale! And you worked so hard with this. I'm always impressed with your courage to write in English, which isn't your first language. Thank you for reaching out to me with this! It was fun to work on it with you. It's a magical piece, for sure!

Aww... Thank you so much @katrina-ariel 🙏💖
Means alot and glad you liked it.
I appriciate your help alot and input, made me realize the Hard work behind a poem or a story.
You truly have the gift of words and Im grateful to have gotten a insight on your mind 🥰
Times like this I do se how hard it is with english when its not your first language.
I also realize my writing as I talk in my posts, might work but should need a spelling check 😜 lol
Hard but sooo worth it, fun to write and to get things out.
Much love to You 🤗🌹🤗

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Definitely something different. Glad you found the courage to write it! Really nice poem. Great way to enjoy the ocean!

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Thank you very much 😊🙏 glad you liked it.
And YES this is definitly different from my usual stuff, but I love writing and hope to be able to learn more and practice is the best way right?
Have a wonderful week. Cheers! 🤗🌹💖

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