r.i.p to my suicidal self. lol Definitely a little harsh, but there is truth in there. It's a little obtuse with regards to someone who truly suffers from a deep depressive/suicidal tendencies. That isn't to say that the poem was bad or that I did not enjoy it. Far from it.
I especially loved the end part:
"take this as the suicide note
of your complaining self
and allow yourself to be reborn"
That is very nice. A sentiment we should all consider!