Moonlight princess or darkness

flysky (73)in #poem • 6 years ago (edited)

Will you tell me about your post
Will you say are you a goast
Where is that last vine toast
It will be like now, almost lost

Princess of darkness and night
Is there a light in your star above
Will you ever be saved by light
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Will you ever find your sailors love?

#firerose #frozenbeauty #poetry #love

6 years ago in #poem by flysky (73)

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kantos (62) 6 years ago

Esta super hermoso tu poema, cualquiera diria que esta muy corto, pero no es necesario decir tantas palabras para expresar un sentimiento y siento que lo planteaste de la mejor manera.
Siento que quieres transmitir impaciencia, desasosiego, intranquilidad, nos transmites algo que quieres cambiar pero no encuentras el camino, estas a la espera de tu princesa para que te lleve a tu paraíso de amor.
Esta muy intenso @flysky, me encanto!

This super beautiful poem of yours, you'd think it was too short, but you don't need to say so many words to express a feeling and I feel like you put it in the best way.
I feel that you want to transmit impatience, restlessness, restlessness, you transmit something you want to change but you do not find the way, you are waiting for your princess to take you to your paradise of love.
It's very intense @flysky, I love it!

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THANK YOU!