frozen legends are true

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

Frozen beauty

Ice is polar deep and beyond firn line...

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ice is deep in her heart that frozen ice even frost heavy guardian stands
ice skate dance is in main kingdom quarters festivity royal yard
royal frozen spikes hanging from eaves as jewel to dance charm
magnificent icicles decorating the crown ring of skate stage

because she doesn't believe in pure unconditional warm ocean
she was thinking that she will never live the day
to see pure ocean warm heart sailing in her frozen kingdom
that seams as legend on its own that mighty sailor will arrive one day

just for frozen queen beauty , just for her and only her ,
warm ocean heart is finding it's rhythm in this madness
her question was whisper quietly why, why all the trouble to get here...
the legend is true - he said

mighty sailor have found north start to her frozen mystery kingdom
secret map of frozen heart that the real sailors is looking for life
legend of her frozen beauty has been rumored on all sailors ports
high price paid and life span across danger waters is at near end or the path

but warm ocean heart is vast...
vast that reaches of outer frozen space...

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Saya seakan menemukan filosofi hidup yang hendak disajikan @flysky, puisi ini sepintas berlatar sejarah namun ketika dicermati secara mendalam nyatanya berkisah bagaimana kita mesti memperlakukan kehidupan.

Memiliki pertahanan kokoh dalam membentengi diri dan tak mudah dikoyak persepsi barangkali hal semacam ini yang hendak disampaikan @flysky lewat puisi yang ditulisnyavkali ini

I seem to find the philosophy of life that would be presented @ flysky, this poem is at a glance history but when examined deeply in fact tells how we should treat life. Having a strong defense in fortifying and not easily torn perception perhaps this kind of thing that would be submitted @ flysky through poetry written thisvkali

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Keep spirit in your activity

Even though i have never seen snow, i totally understand the concept of this poetic creativity. Nice one my friend! Keep the ink flowing

What if I run out of the paper
I hope i never will

Even if you run out of paper, you can never run out of your intellectual property!

Hmmmm.... This is nice and refreshing, thanks for this post @flysky

The frozen beauty, been frozen in time.
With eyes so cold but the heart is warm
When sailor came from a faraway glance
The frozen heart has melted in fire.

Im not a poet but i just tried.
I hope you dont mind
Thank you for sharing your poetic mind sir @flysky
In poetry we cultivate imagery, this is one great example of your creativity.

Enjoy your day sir @flysky

Wow! I am delighted with this narrative, I am captivated, I am intrigued and I fall in love .. what writing talent you have, I congratulate you

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It's like a story but on the ice. but it has something of romance and good love so I understood it sr @flysky interesting

it is story to be shared on today and tomorrow where we go along

The scenery is so beautiful ,,, I like it very much

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