MY POEM #1: "That Butterfly" - This is my first poem

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

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That girl has smiles and tears
That butterfly is flying with fears
She wandered, she flew for something
But only got wounded and broke her wings.

That colors faded, paler than a dove
That butterfly is finally in love
She flapped here wings, she flew again
And rested on the one her heart is yearning.

She stayed for a while and a little more
Her mind knew, her heart was unsure
Now she regretted for learning how to fly
For that butterfly cried, that butterfly died.

Photo above by: @dinmark09 and imgur.com
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Oh wow the emotions

thank you :D

Sigh... 😭😭😭 poor 🦋 butterfly...💔💔💔

Very nice poem @dinmark09! :) It doesn't seem it is your first thou :D Keep posting and keep sharing .. If you don't mind, I made some poems too. You can visit my blogs and I hope you like them :D

thank you sir, I hope you like it

I do like it :) but don't ever kill a butterfly again! hahaha!

So bakit mo pinatay yung butterfly? HAHAHAHAHA. Pakisagot. 😂

hehehe bitter kasi ako :P hahaha

Wow nice one!

I wonder why her heart is unsure?

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