The Day I realized I had a talent for visual direction

I never wanted to be a photographer but this day changed my perspective. I met up this random young lady I only knew from Instagram and we decided to do a shoot on the local roof top that all the cool kids party on as the sun set. I feel like the photos came out exactly how I wanted them and this was my 3rd time shooting with a 35mm film camera. What do you guys think of my work? Can you give me some constructive criticism.