PDC3K [week27] Entry : Bon Voyage
space stace is in!
your face, worried
yet, I still grin
magnetic pulls and pushes on que
I can sleep on command and other lies
I'm sure deep down are true
as my feelings magnify around ooh
who?
the question reverberates
worlds apart from the very nature of my being
everything and nothing
flowing through my vein
existence is pain
continuing to exist
I form into novocain
what is pain to a sunflower?
a child plucking you from mother earth
alienated by birth
so where do I begin?
where does ego end?
start to see the unseen
through every tree
question everything in between
let the channel of thought remain open
despite words not yet spoken
this bridge will never be broken
by truth, I am awoken
I hope you enjoyed my entry!
One Love,
Space Stace Out <3
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Whoa! This was outstanding :) you've got my vote!
Thank you ♥
Oh, I love this! Love how you took a more philosophical approach.
That's one way to use the prompt while it fits well within your poem. As someone who has studied philosophy, I definitely enjoy the theme of your poem. Great write! It definitely earned the first place!
I did enjoy your entry and your way with words and expressions very well conveyed. Thank you for your entry @staceyjean.
here's the link to the contest this is for. Try it out! It's good times
https://steemit.com/poetrydice/@robyneggs/poetry-dice-challenge-3000-week-27-a24011233fea9
Wow its really beautiful and amazing poetry. Keep it up.
Wish you avery happy and bright future.
Wonderful post.i appreciate your post.
Thanks for sharing this post.
Best of luck.
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Thank you 👍✨